Last Love

So, I'll start this off by saying I only bothered to complete one ending (so far).

First, are you planning on majorly updating this title, like adding additional scenes/endings, or do you consider this complete?

While I am grateful you made a Human On Anthro VN, this game has some rather bizarre folly's and plot structure.

In my overall experience, I would say this is around a 2.5/5. I would've given it a 3 for at least doing a different take on the normal Isekai with the whole Syringe/drug angle, though that part also detracts from the game to a lesser degree, despite its originality.

I think you should continue to dip your toes in the Human On Anthro genre, but perhaps stick to a more traditional setting the next time around.

You seem pretty big into Femboys and Mommies, according to your profile, perhaps a game where you play a human Femboy with an anthro family, with them and anthro neighbours as romance options? Just a thought.

The CGs:

I'll start with the backgrounds. Most of these are absolutely serviceable, but there's one major flawed area: Cain's Apartment.

See, the game starts with Cain talking about how awful and horrible his life is, how he was abandoned by his parents, never was anyone's first pick, was never given priority and never given any kind of opportunities.

Alright, that's all well in good, but why is Cain living in a sleek and very expensive-looking modern apartment? That's the exact opposite of where I'd imagine someone like this would live.

I get that there's a limit to what Image Gen can make, but I know for a fact it can generate dingy-looking studio apartments, I've even done so myself. My advice to avoid this is to simply sit back and think about the environment you're generating for your characters.

On the plus side, this was the only major flaw I noticed with the background CGs.

Now the character CGs. These are fine for the most part, but I noticed a shockingly high number of times that the character's snouts and noses changed drastically during sex scenes. This part I am much more forgiving off since Inpainting stuff like this is a complete hassle, but you should keep it in mind that major shifts in anthro faces are much more noticeable than using human characters.

I think my major complained would be Theodora. The game REALLY wants you to think she's a bird woman, but she's obviously just a green angel with a funky nose.

Birds are tough to gen, I get it, but please consider just giving avians a beak and feathers look in the future.

The Writing:

Overall:

Oof, boy, where to start? There are a LOT of major plot kerfuffles.

The intro was actually pretty good at setting a depressing mood, I'd say (though there was waay too much telling vs showing.)

Then Cain's KEPT monologing about nearly the exact subjects for the rest of the VN.

Like, I get that Cain's situation is pretty bleak, but does he have to KEEP saying almost the exact same thing for the entirety of the game? I think a simple proofread would've noticed how much this blends into a big same-y mess.

I don't want to be that guy, but I'm suspecting you used text gen for large portions of the writing. Now, there's nothing necessarily wrong with that, but text gen needs a tight leash when used. Otherwise you end up getting the thing to constantly repeat itself and get stuck in an insidious loop that keeps circling the same subjects you gave it like a shark (hey, there's one in this game!)

Here's another major flaw I noticed:

Cain randomly starts talking about the Syringe shortening his life.

What?? This is literally brought up out of thin air. Cain was given a week to live because of his terminal cancer, the syringe had nothing to do with that. There's an earlier part where he also randomly brings up "I was told to only take this once a day" but the doctor never said anything like that in the scene between them.

Characters and Routes:

Okay, so like I said, one ending done so far. But man, this game really isn't great on choice.

Seraphina is basically THE love interest. Nothing wrong with that, but why present the player like they'll have options when they really won't? The player doesn't even have the option to pick who he wants for his queen, it's completely railroaded.

I honestly feel completely catfished by Leonora. Please, never set up a character like this again. I don't care whether it fits the theme of the game or not. It's completely negative to player choice to introduce her like normal, then have her say "Oh by the way I'm a lesbian, please don't rape me, okay?"

Chirst, what a terrible waste of a character. I was really excited about her too. I assumed I'd actually have a choice in picking her as my queen, but nope, railroaded into Seraphina.

Theodora? Honestly nothing to say because I didn't even get to interact with her with the route I picked apparently.

Astrid is kind of okay. Pretty much a non-character, though. At least with the route I went.

The later choices are even worse IMO. Where the event happens, but it's blocked from the players view. I say this in the most polite way possible: Please never do "choices" like this ever again, it's not actually a choice, it's just the dev covering the player's screen.

Final Thoughts:

Like I said, I think you have potential, but please try and proofread your script and plan out the routes better in the future.